From 357519921d5a3a17cfd26249b7e581c543c0cc21 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeffrey Phillips Freeman <the@jeffreyfreeman.me>
Date: Sun, 1 Mar 2020 21:32:27 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Improved cloud section text.

---
 src/pages/index.tsx | 8 +++++---
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/pages/index.tsx b/src/pages/index.tsx
index c95b43d..7b28cd7 100644
--- a/src/pages/index.tsx
+++ b/src/pages/index.tsx
@@ -59,9 +59,11 @@ export const IndexPage = () => (
             <div className="textcard-content">
               <h2>The Cloud</h2>
               <p>
-                The cloud is a place of fluffiness with things of fluff and rain and rainbows.
-                Fluffiness is how soft something is, rocks arent fluffy, clouds are. So buy our
-                product and be fluffy!
+                Large corperations are in control, we call it the cloud, run by rich corperations
+                that only see you as a commodity. Meanwhile most computers in our community sit idle
+                throughout the day. It is time the community owns the cloud, we are taking control
+                again. Its our privacy, our data, our ideas, now its our rules. Fair prices set by
+                the community, and the profits go back to the community, not large corperations.
               </p>
             </div>
           </div>
-- 
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